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Anonymous
What can I say? Is a good story. How can you know that? If one of these stories we remove the pornographic part and still have a coherent argument that you want to follow, we have a good story.
Sweet n Sour but good nonetheless.
Anonymous
Good old stuff
lol
Ouch...
Anonymous
feel a bit sad
Fuckxxx
good ending
Anonymous
Shit
Anonymous
Ending hit too close home
Anonymous
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Anonymous
those are some low standards of what a "good" story is, anon
Meltdown
The return of the childhood friend to give the glorious sex he dreaming all his life. Outstanding!
Anonymous
Well compared to other stuff it's pretty good
that bitch (-_-
Anonymous
Narcissists suck.
Fucking L
10/19 pretty good reqd
Lily Loli
Despite what has been said in the comments above, if you remove the sex from the story it wouldn't be good. There wouldn't even be a story. However, that doesn't devalue the weight of the narrative, nor it's power. Some may believe a good story of this nature is only good because of what happens around the sex, but it's not. It's about the meaning within. Sex is something integral to life and growing up, and to say it can be removed with no ill effects to this story is absurd. When the sex has emotional depth and meaning, when it changes a character in such a way as it did, I cannot imagine the story without it. He was taken advantage of as a child, and he submitted. To her, it was just something fun to do. To him it became something more. He had to watch her abandon him not once but twice. Even when he tries to move on he's still trapped in the dream, in his submission, because she was his first, but he was only her toy. A story worth less without the sex, and more with it. Deep stuff
Anonymous
The bittersweet ending
Nice story
Yhea just remove the porn stuff or rather dont mind it and focus on the story and you would only see a good and sad story that has sex in it. All in all 5/5
ZERO
Err, how should i say it?
ZERO
Good maybe?
KiriDevilz motherfuckers
The storyline is good. It leaves a good afterfap.so would recommend this to everyone who faps for sexy content and looves storylines
Good story. Short, but well told.
Anonymous
welp , the feeling i got is ... damn. the most fitting choice to be placed in pururin top manga hall of flames. the other is just trash
Anonymous
need another book.
BigWilly
hentaifox.com is a lot better than this site
ZERO
Ugh..., my heart has been stabbed...
An ok Story at the most and not the Best Art
Electronic message
try doujin more there comments are fucking hilarious
Anonymous
I wasn't expecting that ending when I started fapping...
Anonymous
Seriously, how is this not good? I mean, if your definition of good is something like the thinky stuff like Steins;Gate, Lain and Paranoia Agent, then whatever I guess.
I came here to fap not to feel T_T
Remora
I dont know what to feel
Anonymous
i love when the girl over powers the guy and how small he was and the way she touched him as a child and she was a kid
Anonymous
Tous girl is just a whore! I home she'll die dlowly with lot of suffering for coing that To tais poor boy
Lolo
Asu
Asu
Lol
Alnoelmo
Good ,well
Alnoelmo
Good
Weirdo
I liked the ending part
Yuri
TT
Anonymous
It was good
NAMExLESS
What the heck
Anonymous
more and more
Anonymous
ending is shit

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