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Anonymous 5 months ago #3027 Reply
What can I say? Is a good story. How can you know that? If one of these stories we remove the pornographic part and still have a coherent argument that you want to follow, we have a good story.
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Anonymous 5 months ago #3047 Reply
Good old stuff
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Anonymous 5 months ago #3426 Reply
feel a bit sad
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Fuckxxx 5 months ago #3724 Reply
good ending
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Anonymous 4 months ago #5234 Reply
Shit
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Anonymous 3 months ago #5831 Reply
Ending hit too close home
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Anonymous 3 months ago #6248 Reply
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Anonymous 3 months ago #6405 Reply
those are some low standards of what a "good" story is, anon
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Meltdown 3 months ago #6477 Reply
The return of the childhood friend to give the glorious sex he dreaming all his life. Outstanding!
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Anonymous 3 months ago #6614 Reply
Well compared to other stuff it's pretty good
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Anonymous 3 months ago #6691 Reply
Narcissists suck.
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Fucking L 3 months ago #6785 Reply
10/19 pretty good reqd
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Anonymous 2 months ago #7173 Reply
The bittersweet ending
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ZERO 2 months ago #7812 Reply
Err, how should i say it?
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ZERO 2 months ago #7813 Reply
Good maybe?
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KiriDevilz motherfuckers 2 months ago #7821 Reply
The storyline is good. It leaves a good afterfap.so would recommend this to everyone who faps for sexy content and looves storylines
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Anonymous 2 months ago #8140 Reply
welp , the feeling i got is ... damn. the most fitting choice to be placed in pururin top manga hall of flames. the other is just trash
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Anonymous 2 months ago #8837 Reply
need another book.
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BigWilly 2 months ago #8940 Reply
hentaifox.com is a lot better than this site
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ZERO 2 months ago #8998 Reply
Ugh..., my heart has been stabbed...
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Electronic message 1 month ago #9245 Reply
try doujin more there comments are fucking hilarious
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Anonymous 1 month ago #9253 Reply
I wasn't expecting that ending when I started fapping...
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Anonymous 1 month ago #9273 Reply
Seriously, how is this not good? I mean, if your definition of good is something like the thinky stuff like Steins;Gate, Lain and Paranoia Agent, then whatever I guess.
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Remora 1 month ago #9636 Reply
I dont know what to feel
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Anonymous 1 month ago #9643 Reply
i love when the girl over powers the guy and how small he was and the way she touched him as a child and she was a kid
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Anonymous 28 days ago #10135 Reply
Tous girl is just a whore! I home she'll die dlowly with lot of suffering for coing that To tais poor boy
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Lolo 27 days ago #10198 Reply
Asu
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Asu 27 days ago #10199 Reply
Lol
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Alnoelmo 27 days ago #10200 Reply
Good ,well
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Alnoelmo 27 days ago #10201 Reply
Good
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Weirdo 25 days ago #10385 Reply
I liked the ending part
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Anonymous 14 days ago #11055 Reply
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Anonymous 9 days ago #11321 Reply
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Yuri 7 days ago #11416 Reply
TT
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Anonymous 7 days ago #11442 Reply
It was good
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Anonymous 5 days ago #11556 Reply
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NAMExLESS 3 days ago #11727 Reply
What the heck
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Lily_Loli 3 months ago #6905 Reply
Despite what has been said in the comments above, if you remove the sex from the story it wouldn't be good. There wouldn't even be a story. However, that doesn't devalue the weight of the narrative, nor it's power. Some may believe a good story of this nature is only good because of what happens around the sex, but it's not. It's about the meaning within. Sex is something integral to life and growing up, and to say it can be removed with no ill effects to this story is absurd. When the sex has emotional depth and meaning, when it changes a character in such a way as it did, I cannot imagine the story without it. He was taken advantage of as a child, and he submitted. To her, it was just something fun to do. To him it became something more. He had to watch her abandon him not once but twice. Even when he tries to move on he's still trapped in the dream, in his submission, because she was his first, but he was only her toy. A story worth less without the sex, and more with it. Deep stuff
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Skelly 5 months ago #3191 Reply
Ouch...
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iSplatterU 5 months ago #3033 Reply
Sweet n Sour but good nonetheless.
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Joshua641 2 months ago #7546 Reply
Yhea just remove the porn stuff or rather dont mind it and focus on the story and you would only see a good and sad story that has sex in it. All in all 5/5
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HentaiPro 3 months ago #6630 Reply
that bitch (-_-
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Xeanoth 2 months ago #7543 Reply
Nice story
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LonelySamourai 2 months ago #7915 Reply
Good story. Short, but well told.
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luci6191 1 month ago #9061 Reply
An ok Story at the most and not the Best Art
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Snikerz94 1 month ago #9326 Reply
I came here to fap not to feel T_T