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Anonymous 3 months ago #3027 Reply
What can I say? Is a good story. How can you know that? If one of these stories we remove the pornographic part and still have a coherent argument that you want to follow, we have a good story.
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Anonymous 3 months ago #3047 Reply
Good old stuff
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Anonymous 3 months ago #3426 Reply
feel a bit sad
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Anonymous 3 months ago #3433 Reply
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Fuckxxx 3 months ago #3724 Reply
good ending
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Anonymous 2 months ago #5056 Reply
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Anonymous 1 month ago #5234 Reply
Shit
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Anonymous 1 month ago #5577 Reply
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Anonymous 1 month ago #5830 Reply
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Anonymous 1 month ago #5831 Reply
Ending hit too close home
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Anonymous 30 days ago #6046 Reply
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Anonymous 30 days ago #6047 Reply
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Anonymous 25 days ago #6248 Reply
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Anonymous 22 days ago #6405 Reply
those are some low standards of what a "good" story is, anon
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Meltdown 21 days ago #6477 Reply
The return of the childhood friend to give the glorious sex he dreaming all his life. Outstanding!
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Anonymous 18 days ago #6614 Reply
Well compared to other stuff it's pretty good
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Anonymous 18 days ago #6653 Reply
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Anonymous 17 days ago #6691 Reply
Narcissists suck.
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Fucking L 15 days ago #6785 Reply
10/19 pretty good reqd
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Anonymous 7 days ago #7173 Reply
The bittersweet ending
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Anonymous 6 days ago #7194 Reply
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Lily_Loli 13 days ago #6905 Reply
Despite what has been said in the comments above, if you remove the sex from the story it wouldn't be good. There wouldn't even be a story. However, that doesn't devalue the weight of the narrative, nor it's power. Some may believe a good story of this nature is only good because of what happens around the sex, but it's not. It's about the meaning within. Sex is something integral to life and growing up, and to say it can be removed with no ill effects to this story is absurd. When the sex has emotional depth and meaning, when it changes a character in such a way as it did, I cannot imagine the story without it. He was taken advantage of as a child, and he submitted. To her, it was just something fun to do. To him it became something more. He had to watch her abandon him not once but twice. Even when he tries to move on he's still trapped in the dream, in his submission, because she was his first, but he was only her toy. A story worth less without the sex, and more with it. Deep stuff
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Skelly 3 months ago #3191 Reply
Ouch...
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iSplatterU 3 months ago #3033 Reply
Sweet n Sour but good nonetheless.
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Joshua641 19 hours ago #7546 Reply
Yhea just remove the porn stuff or rather dont mind it and focus on the story and you would only see a good and sad story that has sex in it. All in all 5/5
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HentaiPro 18 days ago #6630 Reply
that bitch (-_-
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Xeanoth 20 hours ago #7543 Reply
Nice story