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Anonymous 4 months ago #3027 Reply
What can I say? Is a good story. How can you know that? If one of these stories we remove the pornographic part and still have a coherent argument that you want to follow, we have a good story.
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Anonymous 4 months ago #3047 Reply
Good old stuff
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Anonymous 4 months ago #3426 Reply
feel a bit sad
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Anonymous 4 months ago #3433 Reply
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Fuckxxx 4 months ago #3724 Reply
good ending
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Anonymous 3 months ago #5056 Reply
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Anonymous 3 months ago #5234 Reply
Shit
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Anonymous 2 months ago #5577 Reply
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Anonymous 2 months ago #5831 Reply
Ending hit too close home
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Anonymous 2 months ago #6046 Reply
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Anonymous 2 months ago #6248 Reply
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Anonymous 2 months ago #6405 Reply
those are some low standards of what a "good" story is, anon
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Meltdown 2 months ago #6477 Reply
The return of the childhood friend to give the glorious sex he dreaming all his life. Outstanding!
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Anonymous 2 months ago #6614 Reply
Well compared to other stuff it's pretty good
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Anonymous 2 months ago #6653 Reply
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Anonymous 2 months ago #6691 Reply
Narcissists suck.
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Fucking L 2 months ago #6785 Reply
10/19 pretty good reqd
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Anonymous 1 month ago #7173 Reply
The bittersweet ending
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Anonymous 1 month ago #7194 Reply
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ZERO 1 month ago #7812 Reply
Err, how should i say it?
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ZERO 1 month ago #7813 Reply
Good maybe?
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KiriDevilz motherfuckers 1 month ago #7821 Reply
The storyline is good. It leaves a good afterfap.so would recommend this to everyone who faps for sexy content and looves storylines
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Anonymous 26 days ago #8078 Reply
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Anonymous 25 days ago #8140 Reply
welp , the feeling i got is ... damn. the most fitting choice to be placed in pururin top manga hall of flames. the other is just trash
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Anonymous 24 days ago #8209 Reply
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Anonymous 15 days ago #8837 Reply
need another book.
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Anonymous 15 days ago #8852 Reply
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BigWilly 14 days ago #8940 Reply
hentaifox.com is a lot better than this site
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ZERO 13 days ago #8998 Reply
Ugh..., my heart has been stabbed...
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Anonymous 13 days ago #9015 Reply
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Anonymous 13 days ago #9040 Reply
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Electronic message 10 days ago #9245 Reply
try doujin more there comments are fucking hilarious
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Anonymous 10 days ago #9253 Reply
I wasn't expecting that ending when I started fapping...
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Anonymous 9 days ago #9273 Reply
Seriously, how is this not good? I mean, if your definition of good is something like the thinky stuff like Steins;Gate, Lain and Paranoia Agent, then whatever I guess.
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Anonymous 7 days ago #9471 Reply
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Remora 4 days ago #9636 Reply
I dont know what to feel
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Anonymous 4 days ago #9643 Reply
i love when the girl over powers the guy and how small he was and the way she touched him as a child and she was a kid
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Anonymous 2 days ago #9767 Reply
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Lily_Loli 2 months ago #6905 Reply
Despite what has been said in the comments above, if you remove the sex from the story it wouldn't be good. There wouldn't even be a story. However, that doesn't devalue the weight of the narrative, nor it's power. Some may believe a good story of this nature is only good because of what happens around the sex, but it's not. It's about the meaning within. Sex is something integral to life and growing up, and to say it can be removed with no ill effects to this story is absurd. When the sex has emotional depth and meaning, when it changes a character in such a way as it did, I cannot imagine the story without it. He was taken advantage of as a child, and he submitted. To her, it was just something fun to do. To him it became something more. He had to watch her abandon him not once but twice. Even when he tries to move on he's still trapped in the dream, in his submission, because she was his first, but he was only her toy. A story worth less without the sex, and more with it. Deep stuff
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Skelly 4 months ago #3191 Reply
Ouch...
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iSplatterU 4 months ago #3033 Reply
Sweet n Sour but good nonetheless.
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Joshua641 1 month ago #7546 Reply
Yhea just remove the porn stuff or rather dont mind it and focus on the story and you would only see a good and sad story that has sex in it. All in all 5/5
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HentaiPro 2 months ago #6630 Reply
that bitch (-_-
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Xeanoth 1 month ago #7543 Reply
Nice story
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LonelySamourai 29 days ago #7915 Reply
Good story. Short, but well told.
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Maglsk 23 days ago #8289 Reply
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luci6191 12 days ago #9061 Reply
An ok Story at the most and not the Best Art
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Snikerz94 8 days ago #9326 Reply
I came here to fap not to feel T_T